四级写作有以下这些作文模板就可以拿高分了，我考四级就看了一下 这个。希望以下这些对你有帮助。 你可以打印出来。 （当然句型我是有的，只是特别多，看一遍都要一两天，所以这里就给你这个建议，不知道你是否会满意？就高中学的那些句型就足够了，语法也一样。）
写作模板——提纲式作文
1． 对立观点式
A．有人认为X 是好事，赞成X， 为什么？
B． 有人认为X 是坏事， 反对X，为什么？
C．我的看法。
Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X. They point out the fact that 支持X 的第一个原因。They also argue that 支持X 的另一个原因。
However, other people stand on a different ground. They consider it harmful to do X. They firmly point out that 反对X 的第一个理由。 An example can give the details of this argument: 一个例子。
There is some truth in both arguments. But I think the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages. In addition to the above-mentioned negative effects it might bring about, X also may X 的有一个坏处。
2． 批驳观点式
A．一个错误观点。
B． 我不同意。
Many people argue that 错误观点。By saying that, they mean 对这个观点的进一步解释。An example they have presented is that 一个例子。（According to a survey performed by X on a group of Y, almost 80% of them 赞成这个错误观点或者受到这个错误观点的影响）。
There might be some element of truth in these people’s belief. But if we consider it in depth, we will feel no reservation to conclude that 与错误观点相反的观点。There are a number of reasons behind my belief. (以下参照辩论文的议论文写法)。
3． 社会问题（现象）式
A．一个社会问题或者现象。
B． 产生的原因
C．对社会和我们生活的影响
D． 如何杜绝。（如果是问题的话）
E． 前景的预测。
Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental problem. (X has increasingly become a common concern of the public). According to a survey, 调查内容说明这种现象的情况。（或者是一个例子）。
There are a couple of reasons booming this problem/phenomenon. 下面参照辩论式议论文的写法。
X has caused substantial impact on the society and our daily life, which has been articulated in the following aspects. 参照辩论式议论文的写法。
A dozen of measures are supposed to take to prevent X from bringing us more harm. 参照辩论式议论文的写法。
Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people will ……..
写作模板——图表式作文
It is obvious in the graphic/table that the rate/number/amount of Y has undergone dramatic changes. It has gone up/grown/fallen/dropped considerably in recent years (as X varies). At the point of X1, Y reaches its peak value of …(多少).
What is the reason for this change? Mainly there are … (多少) reasons behind the situation reflected in the graphic/table. First of all, …(第一个原因). More importantly, …(第二个原因). Most important of all, …(第三个原因).
From the above discussions, we have enough reason to predict what will happen in the near future. The trend described in the graphic/table will continue for quite a long time (if necessary measures are not taken括号里的使用于那些不太好的变化趋势).
英语四六级写作试题模板——辩论式议论文
模版1
Some people believe (argue, recognize, think) that 观点1. But other people take an opposite side. They firmly believe that 观点2. As for me, I agree to the former/latter idea.
There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief. First of all, 论据1.
More importantly, 论据2.
Most important of all, 论据3.
In summary, 总结观点. As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心.
或 From above, we can predict that 预测.
模版2
People hold different views about X. Some people are of the opinion that 观点1, while others point out that 观点2. As far as I am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds more weight.
For one thing, 论据1.
For another, 论据2.
Last but not the least, 论据3.
To conclude, 总结观点. As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心.
或 From above, we can predict that 预测.
模版3
There is no consensus of opinions among people about X（争论的焦点）。Some people are of the view that 观点1，while others take an opposite side, firmly believing that 观点2。As far as I am concerned, the former/latter notion is preferable in many senses. The reasons are obvious.
First of all, 论据1。
Furthermore, 论据2。
Among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest. That is, 论据3。
A natural conclusion from the above discussion is that总结观点。
As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心.
或 From above, we can predict that 预测.
(I)说明原因型模块
Currently, XX has been the order of the day. This does demonstrate the theory --- nothing is more valuable than XX
It is clear that (1). If you (2), as a result, your dreams will come true. On the contrary, if you (3).
Failure will be following with you. It turns out that all your plan falls through.
No one can deny another fact that (4).You don't have to look very far to find out the truth, in respect that we all know (5).It will exert a profound influence upon (6).With reference to my standpoint, I think (7).
注释:
1:XX的第一个优点
2:支持XX的做法
3:不支持XX的做法
4:XX的第二个优点
5:举例证明优点二
6:说明XX优点三的影响第三天我写的相应作文:
The importance of self-confidence
Currently, self-confidence has been the order of the day. This does demonstrate the theory --- nothing is more valuable than self-confidence.
It is clear that (self-confidence means trust in one's abilities). If you (are full of self-confidence, it will bring your creative power to play, arouse your enthusia** for work, and help you overcome difficulties), as a result, your dreams will come true. On the contrary, if you (have no confidence in yourself, there is little possibility that you would ever achieve anything ). Failure will be following with you。It turns out that all your plan falls through. No one can deny another fact that (self-confidence gives you light when you are in dark and encouragement when you are di**ayed).You don't have to look very far to find out the truth, in respect that we all know (the secret of MMe. Curie lies in perseverance and self-confidence, the latter in particular). It will exert a profound influence upon (the achievement of one's ambitions). With reference to my standpoint, I think (he that can have self-confidence can have what he will).
(I)说明原因型模块(2)
In recent years, XX has caused a heated debate on (1).
The factors for (2).First of all, (3).Then, there comes a case that (4). Moreover, (5). Especially when (6).Indeed, these unique points can be collected the remind people that (7).In this way, we should behave just like (8).
The impact of Television
In recent years, with the development of science and technology, 80 percent of all homes in China have satellite TV, offering as many as 50 channels. It has caused a heated debate on (the impact of television on children). Many parents are worried about the impact of so much television on children.
The factors for (parents' worry is that children are indulge in television and spend too much time on it.).First of all, (with so many programs to choose from, children are not getting as much exercise as they should ).Then, there comes a case that (some studies have show that excessive watching of television by millions of children has lowered their ability to achieve in school ).
Moreover, (the effect on children's minds are more serious than the effect on children's bodies). Especially when (the children are too **all to judge what programs are suit to them).Indeed, these unique points can be connected to remind parents that (they should pay close attention to and responsibilities for supervising their children's TV viewing).In this way, children will not be influenced too deeply.
(I)说明原因型模块(4)
For most of us today, (1). From above, we can find that the reasons why (2)are as follows.
The primary reason, I think, is (3).Second,(4). The third reason, actually, is (5).The significance for (6)。
Therefore, (7).
注释:
(1)人们针对XX的态度和举措
(2)归纳现状
(3)第一个原因
(4)第二个原因
(5)第三个原因
(6)重申造成现状的最重要原因
Pollution
Most of us today (recognize that environmental pollution has been a greatly serious problem. lots of plants trees corps are destroyed by bad air. many fish die of poisonous water. thousands of people die from eating poisoned fish or breathing in gas. therefore, environmental pollution should be responsible for these diseases that are disabling, or bringing death not only to human beings, but also to wild life.)From above, we can find that the reasons why (environment are polluted more and more seriously)are as follows.
the primary reason, I think, is (the reason of harmful substances into environment. for example, to prevent insects, farmers make use of great amounts of insecticides, so as to have bumper harvests. however, they pollute air, water and land ).
Second,(the gas coming from the car engines and factories also make environment polluted badly ). the third reason actually is (the result of a growing population in the world. everyday, so much litter and waste are poured out from houses, also pollute the environment ). The significance for (controlling pollution) noted that it's high time that more effective measures should be taken. Therefore, (new laws should be passed to limit the amount of pollutants from factories. moreover, in the households, there is an obvious need to reduce litter and waste. let's make our good efforts, and the world will be a safer place to live for us).
(I)说明原因型模块(5)
These days we often hear that (1).It is common that (2). Why does such circumstance occur in spite of social protects? For one thing, (3).For another, (4). What is more, since (5),it is natural that (6 ).To solve the problem is not easy at all, but is worth trying. We should do something such as (7) to improve he present situation, and I do believe everything will be better in the future.
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(1)提出论题
(2)说明现状
(3)理由一
(4)理由二
(5)理由三
(6)理由三引起的后果
(7)解决方法
Pollution of environment
These days we often hear that (our living conditions are getting more and more serious because of the destruction of our environment ).It is common that (many trees and animals are near extinction, and the all-important food chain has been destroyed.).
Why does such circumstance occur in spite of social protects? For one thing, (the population of the world is increasing so rapidly that the world has been so crowded. ).For another,(the overuse of natural resources has influenced the balance of natural ecology ). What is more, since (the industrial revolution ),it is natural that (a great number of factories have been springing up like mushrooms. The **oke and harmful chemicals released from factories also pollute the environment).
To solve the problem is not easy at all, but is worthing. We should do something such as (planting more trees, equipping cars with pollution-control devices and learning to recycling natural resources )to improve the present situation, and I do believe everything will be better in the future.
写作模板——图表式作文
It is obvious in the graphic/table that the rate/number/amount of Y has undergone dramatic changes. It has gone up/grown/fallen/dropped considerably in recent years (as X varies). At the point of X1, Y reaches its peak value of …(多少).
What is the reason for this change? Mainly there are … (多少)reasons behind the situation reflected in the graphic/table. First of all, …(第一个原因). More importantly, …(第二个原因). Most important of all, …(第三个原因).
From the above discussions, we have enough reason to predict what will happen in the near future. The trend described in the graphic/table will continue for quite a long time (if necessary measures are not taken括号里的使用于那些不太好的变化趋势).
写作模板——提纲式作文
1． 对立观点式
A. 有人认为X 是好事，赞成X， 为什么？
B. 有人认为X 是坏事， 反对X，为什么？
C. 我的看法。
Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X. They point out the fact that 支持X 的第一个原因。They also argue that 支持X 的另一个原因。
However, other people stand on a different ground. They consider it harmful to do X. They firmly point out that 反对X 的第一个理由。 An example can give the details of this argument:
There is some truth in both arguments. But I think the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages. In addition to the above-mentioned negative effects it might bring about, X also may X 的有一个坏处。
2． 批驳观点式
A．一个错误观点。
B． 我不同意。
Many people argue that 错误观点。By saying that, they mean 对这个观点的进一步解释。An example they have presented is that 一个例子。(According to a survey performed by X on a group of Y, almost 80% of them 赞成这个错误观点或者受到这个错误观点的影响)。
There might be some element of truth in these people’s belief. But if we consider it in depth, we will feel no reservation to conclude that 与错误观点相反的观点。There are a number of reasons behind my belief. (以下参照辩论文的议论文写法)。
3． 社会问题(现象)式
A．一个社会问题或者现象
B． 产生的原因
C．对社会和我们生活的影响
D． 如何杜绝。(如果是问题的话)
E． 前景的预测。
Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental problem. (X has increasingly become a common concern of the public). According to a survey, 调查内容说明这种现象的情况。(或者是一个例子)。
There are a couple of reasons booming this problem/phenomenon.下面参照辩论式议论文写法。
X has caused substantial impact on the society and our daily life, which has been articulated in the following aspects. 参照辩论式议论文的写法。
A dozen of measures are supposed to take to prevent X from bringing us more harm. 同上
Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people will ……..
辩论式议论文模版1
Some people believe (argue, recognize, think)that 观点1. But other people take an opposite side. They firmly believe that 观点2. As for me, I agree to the former/latter idea. There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief. First of all, 论据1. More importantly, 论据2. Most important of all, 论据3. In summary, 总结观点. As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心.或:From above, we can predict that 预测.
模版2
People hold different views about X. Some people are of the opinion that 观点1, while others point out that 观点2. As far as I am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds more weight.
For one thing, 论据1.
For another, 论据2.
Last but not the least, 论据3.
To conclude, 总结观点. As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心.
或 From above, we can predict that 预测.
模版3
There is no consensus of opinions among people about X(争论的焦点)。Some people are of the view that 观点1，while others take an opposite side, firmly believing that 观点2。As far as I am concerned, the former/latter notion is preferable in many senses. The reasons are obvious.
First of all, 论据1。
Furthermore, 论据2。
Among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest. That is, 论据3。
A natural conclusion from the above discussion is that总结观点。
As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心. 或 From above, we can predict that 预测.
1. 来一篇反衬作文200
我，考砸了放学了，往日那清脆的 *** 却变得那么嘶哑. 我走在回家的路上，路是那样长，一步、两步……双腿像灌了铅似的.沉甸甸的书包里装着沉甸甸的分数. 回到家，我打开书包，拿出那张让我五内如焚的试卷.我想哭，我想蒙在被窝里号啕大哭.因为我考砸了. 那又大又红的两个数字使我永远都忘不了，那两个大叉叉使我从天堂走向了地狱.我看着看着……突然，妈妈的脚步声响了.我一下子成了一只胆小的老鼠，忙把试卷往书包里塞，可还是没有逃过妈妈的“火眼金睛”.她三步并做两步地走了过来，拿起我的试卷仔细得看了起来.看着妈妈的样子，我心想：这下死定了，不“粉身碎骨”也要“残废终身”了.妈妈看了试卷，果然大怒：“怎么考的，只考了84分……”我怕，我不敢看妈妈的眼睛…… 过了一会儿，妈妈走了.我打开窗户，抬头望去.远方那一轮夕阳用自己的余辉染红了一抹天空，留下红彤彤的一片.那红，鲜红鲜红的，似乎告诉我：明天，太阳还会升起. 对啊，拼搏之后，明朝还是个艳阳天。
2. 用欲扬先抑和反衬的写作手法,写一篇200字的猜猜他是谁母爱难道只是给我们好吃的、好玩的爱吗？不，起码对我来说不是这样。母亲的爱是多种多样的，在一件事之前，我还没理解这句话的含义。
那时在我很小的时候，在幼儿园不慎跌伤了，流了很多血，回家向妈妈哭诉，本以为妈妈会说：“哎哟，这是怎么回事啊！快来，妈妈给你看看，给你上药。”可是没想到，妈妈说出了几句令我至今难忘的话：“怎么了，哦，没事，就一点小伤，怕什么，擦点药就好了。”我听了之后很吃惊，又很伤心，妈妈肯定不喜欢我了，我当时就是这样想的。
晚上睡觉的时候，我一个人偷偷地哭泣，突然听到妈妈的卧室传来说话的声音，我赶紧屏住呼吸，只听见爸爸说：“孩子受伤了，你也不安慰一下。”我心想，爸爸说的对！又听见妈妈说：“你知道什么，孩子马上就长大了她不能再依赖我们了，她有一天迟早会独自生活，到时候她受伤了，怎么办……”我突然间明白了，妈妈是爱我的，她这样做，是为了我好！我又哭了，不过这次的泪水不是委屈的，而是感谢的！
因为妈妈的几句话，我在困难面前从未低过头：数学考试没考好，抓紧在家复习，争取下一次考个好成绩……我也知道了，人的一生注定要独立生活，不能依靠父母。所以，现在有一点小事，我都会自己解决，并把这件事解决到最好！
3. 运用所学的以景写情的方法,写出放学路上的某种心情.200字左右
1、耀眼的阳光斜斜地自西边洒射，拉长了人的影子.天干干净净，白云畅飞在天际，像是蓝天高高扬起的唇角.绿柳轻轻垂下来，在清风中摇曳，伴着鸟儿的歌唱翩跹起舞.一切都是透亮的，透亮的天，透亮的云，透亮的太阳，和行人透亮的笑容.（这段可以用来体现自己愉快的心情，也可以用来反衬自己悲伤的心情.）2、风猎猎地刮着，带着仿佛从云层中卷下来的凉气在大街小巷中飞掠.阴云压境，似乎随时都会倾下瓢泼大雨.路人行色匆匆，小贩纷纷收摊回家.灰色笼罩了大地.还被“扣留”在教室的同学议论纷纷，虽有事先带了伞而依旧悠哉悠哉干自己事的，但更多的人还是担忧地不时望向天空.（用法同上.）3、知了无休无止地大叫，地面干黄干黄的，绿叶打着蔫儿.行人的脚步滞涩，各类鞋子蹭在水泥地上发出闷闷的刺啦声.人们表情或木然或匆忙，却像是焖炉里的干柴，笑着的，却那样扎眼，明晃晃地嘲讽着.放眼望去，侧耳而听，全是一片叫人难过的心焦.（用法同上，体现自己焦虑窝火的心情或反衬自己平和淡定的心境.）第三个描写类型的话《骆驼祥子》里有非常棒的描写，初三上的语文书里《骆驼祥子》的选段中也有.这里初三.自己写的，文采不太好，要是实在找不到别的就凑合看看吧，而且不太清楚你们老师具体有什么要求，不过还是希望可以帮到你！写作就是多看书，总看总看，慢慢就会写了.什么书都行，玄幻啊言情啊武侠啊童话啊科幻啊总之任何可以让你看得高兴的书，因为只要是得以出版的书必然有可取之处，至少应付作文是没问题的.不过要是还想写得更好那就一定得看名著啦。
4.美好的回忆 过去的时间已不复存在，但是，留给我最多的，是时间中的记忆.我曾幻想着让时光倒流，但我毕竟做不到，所以，在我的内心中，过去的生活给我留下的只是美好的回忆…… 我回忆春天，鸟语花香的季节.我们放声高歌，走在田间小路上.春游对于孩子们来说是最有吸引力的，然而炒菜做饭、奔跑游戏，则更是不亦乐乎.我们坐在树下，望着天空.天是蓝蓝的，在蓝天下，树枝上已长出了嫩芽，我仿佛看见它正在茁壮成长，沐浴在春天的阳光下.那嫩芽，不正是朝气蓬勃的我们吗？我回忆夏天，满眼新绿的季节.在那片属于我的小花园中，生长着无数的小花小草.草儿绿地发亮，而花儿开地更为鲜艳！零星的花朵杂散在小园中，它们虽没有牡丹的娇艳，也没有茉莉的芬芳，但它们依然那样楚楚动人，美丽可爱.远处，一个黄点飞来，近了，更近了！噢，原来是一只蜜蜂，很小很小的.它落在一朵野菊上，吮吸着甘甜的花蜜.当它离开时，花粉也随之而去，伴着蜜蜂，四处安家.那蜜蜂，不正是我们的辛勤的园丁吗？我回忆秋天，拥有收获的季节.田野里，瞧去，满是金黄，随着风儿不断起伏，犹如一波翻腾的海浪.果园里，苹果和梨儿挂满枝头，是那么水灵，叫人垂涎.咬一口，流香四溢，叫人久久不能忘怀.校园里，我们叽叽喳喳地说个不停，一个暑假的未见，彼此免不了思念.暑假中，我们学会了许多东西，那知识，不正是我们的收获吗？我回忆冬天，洋溢温馨的季节.树叶儿虽已落光，但还偶尔可见鸟儿在树上唱歌；小草儿虽已枯黄，但它明年还会重新生长；元旦的寒风虽仍刺骨，但那一张张新年的贺卡却处处充满着温情.它寄托着同学们的一份友谊，一份真诚，那祝福，不正是那许久的温馨吗？我回忆过去，更向往未来的春、夏、秋、冬.让它们充满鸟语，布满新绿，注定收获，洋溢温馨.让它们给我留下更多的美好回忆。
5. 用反衬的手法写一篇作文在我们这个多姿多彩的大千世界里，科学家们根据大自然的启示，发明了许多先进设备。
比如：日光灯是科学家爱迪生根据萤火虫在夜间飞行发出冷光受到启示发明的；潜水艇也是根据鱼能在水里自由自在的活动发明的；蜻蜓也给了创造飞机的科学家提供了许多启示。..
我心想：科学家能够借助大自然的启示发明这么多东西，那么我们也可以借大自然中景物的启示发明某种东西。于是，我陷入了沉思，突然，我看见一只啄木鸟正在替大树治病。这棵大树看起来很粗大，但是一只虫子也没有，我们就一定会以为大树没病，其实不然，虫子在大树内，人的眼睛是看不到的，而啄木鸟却是靠听力准确判断大树的病因，准确地找出虫子所在的位置，然后把大树体内的虫子吃掉，这就算把大树的病治好了。大树果然与以前不同了，啄木鸟没给大树治病前，大树显然得奄奄一息，可治好了病后，大树又恢复了以前的生机勃勃。看到这一幕，我不禁冒出了一个念头：啄木鸟治病的速度这么快，我可以发明一个专门治病的小型机器人啊！
我想，我要发明的小型机器人外表独特，它像人一样，但比人要小得多，薄薄的一层，看起来像一张纸，而且家家户户都有，只要把它挂在门口，鲜艳的蓝色和**配外表特别的“新型测体仪”，它不仅装饰家门口，还可以为走过的人做全身检查，如果你没病，那它就会亮出绿灯；如果你发烧了或是感冒了，那“测体仪”就会查出你的病因，并亮出红灯警示和显示出治疗方法。如果是病情较重的，那亮出的红灯就会一闪一闪的，并且查出病因，显示治疗方法和要注意的事情，并且把治疗方法和要注意的事打印出来。经过这种机器医治过的病人，全都好了，还不用上医院，这就能更好地解决了农民的看病难看病贵的问题，减轻了农民生活上的负担，如果家家都有了这种机器，甭提有多方便啊！
6. 摘抄反衬和衬托写作手法的段落二百字画花总要画绿叶作陪衬.俗话说：“红花虽好，还需绿叶扶持.”作画是这样，写文章也是如此.作文时，为突出主要人物或事物，常常要用其他人物或事物来陪衬、对照，这种写作方法就叫做衬托（或烘托、映衬）.衬托是对描述对象采用的一种间接表现手法，是通过对其他人物或事物的记叙，从侧面形容、宣染，以达到突出主要描写对象、深化主题、提高文章感染力的艺术效果.
(1)正衬：就是利用同主体事物相类似的事物作陪衬.
如《松坊溪 的冬天》，文章一下笔并不是就写松坊溪冬天的美景，而是用了很多笔墨去描绘松坊溪平时优美的景色，然后再写雪后松坊溪的美景.这就衬托出雪后的松坊溪更美.
(2)反衬：就是从反面衬托，利用同主体事物相反或相异的事物作陪衬.
如《小站》：文中写在列车经过小站这一转瞬间，“你也许看到一间红瓦灰墙的小屋，而这一切又立即消失了，火车两旁依然是逼人 而来的山岩和巨石.”这是用“逼人而来的山岩和巨石”来反衬车站的“小”.文中写“站在月台上向四周望去，只看到光秃秃的石头山，没有什么秀丽的景色.可是就在这儿，就在这个小站上，却出现了一股活泼的喷泉，几树灿烂的杏花.”这是用到处“光秃秃的石头山”来反衬小站的“美”，给旅客带来了温暖的春意.
7. 反衬写人作文300字叔叔是个乐观家 一提起我的叔叔，那可是颇负盛名。
你随便拉一个我们院子里的人问一问，哪个人不知道他。上次他来我们家窜门的时候不但招来了一帮警察，还惹哭了一个小孩，又让一位老奶奶摔了一跤。
究竟是怎么回事呢？且听我慢慢道来。 那天，我去火车站接叔叔。
叔叔一看见我，高兴地说：“呦，长这么高了！”我刚要帮他拿行李，一群警察气势汹汹地来了，把我拉到他们的身后，小声对我说：“小朋友，以后要注意远离这些坏人！”我正纳闷不知道发生了什么事，然后一群警察就把叔叔团团围住了。叔叔一愣，随后笑眯眯地对我说：“你们家是不是有钱了，请了这么多保镖？”我差点晕倒在地，要不是后来警察弄清了叔叔的身份，我们不知道还要在派出所呆多久呢！ 我和叔叔拎着沉重的行李回到我住的院子，这时，一位老奶奶推着一个小婴儿来到我们身边，我问了一声奶奶好，又继续朝家走去，走了一段路，身后就传来一阵哭闹声，我回头一看，只见叔叔把小婴儿弄哭了，我急忙跑过去，叔叔还是站在那，满脸笑容，对我说：“瞧，这小家伙哭起来多可爱！”什么？！把人家弄哭了还说他可爱，真没见过这样的人，老奶奶也不满地白了他一眼，正要去安慰小宝宝，叔叔笑着推了老奶奶一把，说：“我来就行了！”谁知他劲太大，把老奶奶推倒了，我赶紧将她扶起来，生怕出什么事，老奶奶一起来就训斥我叔叔，我叔叔还是满脸堆笑，让人哭笑不得。
一到家，我就算计着怎么让叔叔走，他待在我家我们没好日子过，他也太乐观了，遇上什么事都笑，惹得全院人都怕他。“丁冬”，糟了，不会是叔叔来了吧，我得先“闪”一步了。
一定要耐心读完，读完你就懂了。
记住：耐心！
记叙的技巧：倒叙（4）
假想另一个题材：叔叔家里本来没有狗，星期天去看婶婶，居然添了一只漂亮的狮子狗，家中顿时热闹了许多。你在记述了这只狗的可爱之后，--以上都是直叙，--忽然想起一个问题：这只狗是从哪里来的呢?它有个奇异的来历，这就是把先发生的事移到后面来写了。
同样的形式：我家院子里有两棵树，晴天有鸟叫，雨天有淅沥声，夏天有浓荫。可是这两棵树当初是谁栽的呢?……
继续推广：学校里有个老校工，胡子都花白了，天天还是摇铃打钟，烧水送茶，他对每个学生都很好，学生都管他叫伯伯。他独身一人，没有家室，在这个学校里服务也有二十年了，那么他以前是做什么的呢?他年轻的时候是怎么样的一个人呢?……
按照一般通行的说法，这颠倒时序的写法叫"倒叙"，倒叙是使文势变化的基本方法。
但是请注意：倒叙毕竟是不自然的，如果读者觉得它违反自然，就不容易接受。所以："倒叙"经常伪装成好像也是直叙的样子。侦探小说是倒叙吗?也许是吧，一件罪案要先有犯罪的人，犯罪的动机，犯罪的方法，实施的步骤，而侦探小说一开始就写犯罪的结果。
从罪案的发生看，侦探小说是倒叙；就侦办的经过看，警察的确是先看见了尸体，再去查死者的姓名，清查死者的人事关系，假设涉嫌的人，一步一步水落石出，最后将凶嫌逮捕。时间的顺序就是如此。这岂不又像直叙?
写侦探小说，作者的布局的确想倒过来写，但他不能以凶手的眼睛建立视点，要以警察或侦探的眼睛建立视点，正是为了避免"**"的倒叙。
几乎每一个谈论"倒叙"的人都举过下面这个例子，各家的"版本"略有不同。故事的大意说，某君从异地还乡，见家中的长工赶着马车在车站迎接，颇感诧异，他以为弟弟会开着汽车来的。
他和长工之间有如下一段对话："家里的汽车呢?"
"昨天撞坏了。"
"怎么撞的?"
"二少爷开快车。"
"哦！我弟弟怎么样?"
"在医院里急救。"
"咳！他开车为什么不顾安全呢！"
"因为他要送老太爷去医院。"
"我爸爸怎么啦?"
"他老人家突然得了心脏病。"
"本本好好的，怎么突然病了呢?"
"因为家里失火，房子都烧掉了。"写这个故事的人似乎有意把整个事件倒过来说，但是读来十分自然，他不但使我们"听见"家破人亡的惨变，也使我们"看见"一个拘谨的、迟钝的、口才笨拙的老仆，他透过人物性格使倒叙显得合理，也就是说使读者"误以为"仍是直叙。
有人在外面应酬了一天，回家后发觉遗失了打火机。那打火机是个纪念品，他不能淡然置之，就坐在家里，抽着烟，回想可能失落在什么地方。他把当天所到的地方、周旋的情景一一在脑子里检查一遍。他倒用不着按照时间先后排列相反的次序。他可以先想印象最深刻的，先滤掉没有可能的。
早晨到某旅馆看某人，在那里并未抽烟，不可能遗失打火机。
下午四点陪朋友喝咖啡，大家称赞他的打火机，有人开玩笑说要"没收"，他也用开玩笑的态度抓起打火机，装进口袋里起身就走。这一幕印象最深刻。
剩下的，一个是中午的餐会座谈，一个是晚上的喜酒，这两个地方最可疑。喜筵上一直有人点烟敬酒，自己的打火机有没有拿出来过?……
这也是倒叙吧?然而它是顺着"他"的思维写的。
如此这般，我们有两个问题：一、从什么地方倒叙；二、怎样"伪装"成直叙的样子。
民间传说有很多女子比男人强，而且她们大半是丫鬟或姨太太。据说有一次，蒙面大盗侵入一个富人的家庭，把全家人都捆起来再大肆劫掠，有一间上了锁的屋子无法进入。盗匪断定屋子里有值钱的东西，威吓富翁交出钥匙，富翁的太太吓慌了，说出钥匙在姨太太身上。姨太太知道不能抵赖，就坦然说："你们放开我，我打开锁，带你们进去拿东西。"强盗认为一个女流不足为患，就给她松了绑。她果然开了锁，举着烛台，跟在强盗后面指指点点，使强盗找到金银。（此处故意遗漏一件事。）强盗走后，富翁急忙报案，官厅查问强盗的模样，都说强盗蒙着脸，看不出来，独有那位姨太太说，她替强盗秉烛照明的时候，故意把烛泪滴在强盗的衣服上，希望官厅赶快搜寻，但看衣服后背有蜡泪的，便是疑犯。（前面遗漏的事在此处写出来。）官厅凭此线索，果然破案。
在这个故事里，把姨太太留下破案的线索改为倒叙，增加叙述的曲折起落，这是把"关键"移后，让读者有所期待，有期待而后有满足。倒叙的"伪装"也很成功，姨太太的布置在当时是一大秘密，旁人看不出来，强盗感觉不出来，只有姨太太自己知道，但她恨不得连自己也瞒着，所以读者对此一隐秘的气氛不加**，以为自己也"应该"和在场的人同样懵然。如此始能破案，而读者赞成破案。
使用局部倒叙的人不要忘记了，"倒叙"的部分叙完以后，多半要回到主流，继续直叙下去。这样，直叙的"大形式"并吞了倒叙的"小形式"，倒叙始完全自然。姨太太设计破案的线索，是倒叙，官厅凭线索破案，是归于直叙。同理：
那个遗失打火机的人，在左思右想、东找西寻之后找到了打火机，并慎重地收藏起来。
那个坐在马车上惊闻家变的归客，只嫌马车太慢，恨不得一步走完。
那白发苍苍的老校工，平生最爱儿童少年，所以选择了现在的职业。
在我家院子里栽树的人早已不知哪里去了，诚所谓"前人种树，后人乘凉。"
婶婶一直希望有只狗陪她，如此这般得到了狮子狗，不寂寞了。
进**院或博物馆之前不早已饿了吗?现在**散场赶快吃饭吧。
倒叙是直叙的变化、调剂，整体倒叙的散文很少；局部倒叙的散文，其倒叙的部分多半不会很长。而且，倒叙完毕回到直叙以后，文章也快要结束了。这就是说，倒叙的部分多半在文章的后半段，甚至有人定出比例，认为约占三分之一的篇幅。
特殊的例子总是有的，试看：越王勾践破吴归
战士还家尽锦衣
宫女如花春满殿
到今只有鹧鸪飞李白的这首诗，倒叙的部分竟占了四分之三。这样写成的散文也有时可以见到。
最后的问题是，纵然使用倒叙，那材料仍然不能写成一篇可读的文章，怎么办?如果这是课堂上作文，你只得硬着头皮写，如果是自由写作，那就放弃这个材料算了。并不是每一经验，每一见闻，每一思虑都是文章，我们放弃的材料比使用的材料不知要多几十倍。不过放弃并非"丢弃"，你可以保存着，说不定什么时候忽然有了用处。
以上的说法尽量约束了写作时的想像力。一开始我就说，我们是讨论忠于事实的记叙文，只希望事实在读者眼中生动一些。
在想像的天地里应该没有乏味的事情，你可以"加油添酱"，甚至可以"妙造自然"。老夫老妻无言对坐，结婚五十年把可说的话都说完了，多乏味啊，文章怎么做得成呢?但若可以任意想像，就有一个蚂蚁在老太太脸上爬，跌进皱纹里头爬不出来，老太太挺富泰，纹沟一挤，几乎可以把蚂蚁活埋了！老先生望着妻子的脸微笑，像五十年前的笑法，而老太太也忽然腼腆起来。
有一年，我穿过台北市新公园，一个十三四岁的小朋友向我兜售奖券。那时正是上午。我问他怎么不上学，他说祖父躺在台大医院的三等病房里缺钱。台大医院近在咫尺，我教他带着我去看他的祖父。进了迷宫似的台大医院，那小朋友忽然不见了，一条条走廊上只有灰沉的光线和使人联想到尸体防腐的药水气味。我想那孩子撒了谎，又在无以自圆的情势下逃走了。这件事我一直不能忘记，也始终不能写出来，材料本身有缺陷，倒叙也难以补救。若是摆脱限制，自由想像，那孩子把我领到病房，朝着病床上的老太太或老先生虚指一下再躲开，而我不知是诈，上前和老太太攀谈起来，岂不就可以得心应手写下去?
在想像受限制或想像力不够的时候，写散文的人宜乎用"观察"来补救。
身在局外，用视觉、听觉、味觉、嗅觉、触觉去发现可写的材料，都算"观察"。若非观察，怎知有老翁老妇默然对坐。若非观察，怎知老翁微笑。不但写老翁微笑，而且写老翁为老妇脸上的蚂蚁而微笑，而且写老妇因老翁之笑而腼腆，是靠进一步的观察，连续观察。
连续观察下去，或者可以发现，两人虽然无话可说，却并不走开。老妇坐在那儿打毛衣，老翁坐在那儿玩扑克牌，这两种"活动"真是风马牛不相及，并无坐在一张桌子上的必要，然而他们谁也不肯走开。这就又"观察"出一些"意思"来。五十年来，两个人的"领域"已合而为一，他们互相依存。如果有材料，此处可以开始"倒叙"了。
或者，你看见另外的景象。那打毛线的老妇，忽然起身离座，她要走开吗?不是，她拿着快要完成的毛衣到老翁身上比试，她是替丈夫打毛衣！过了一会儿，老翁把扑克牌收拢、叠好，起身离座，他是要走开吗?不是，他活动一下筋骨，又坐下了。他还对老妇说："你的运气很好，我算出来了。"原来他是替太太卜卦玩儿呢！两人在形迹上很淡，在情意上却是很浓。这不是更有意思吗?也许这些年，老翁老妇常常无言对坐，一个为一个卜卦，一个为一个打毛衣，或是其他诸如此类的事情，表现出良好的默契。如果有材料，这也是倒叙的时候了。
我们怎能知道他们以前的生活呢，又不能观察他们一辈子。或者你得跟他们谈谈，你得"访问"。访问是观察的一部分。发现了"有意思"的现象，好比找到"矿苗"；
进行访问，就是"开矿"。如果老师说，明天远足，后天作文写《远足记》，那么你在车上不能只打瞌睡，你得跟售票员谈谈，你在中午不能只吃包子，你得跟小贩谈谈。你进了庙不能只求签，你得跟和尚谈谈。
这样，材料就多了。把材料一条一条列在纸上，从其中选出若干条来写你的《远足记》，想想用哪一条开始，哪一条结束，哪一条倒叙，或者根本不必倒叙。
人多半喜欢谈他自己，所以访问多半会有收获。倘若碰了钉子呢?你不是想把文章写好吗?那就不要灰心。
以下这些是我考四级时看过的，我作文犯了一个低级错误，就是把”除夕“写错了，不过也拿了103分。希望以下这些对你有帮助。
写作模板——提纲式作文
1． 对立观点式
A．有人认为X 是好事，赞成X， 为什么？
B． 有人认为X 是坏事， 反对X，为什么？
C．我的看法。
Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X. They point out the fact that 支持X 的第一个原因。They also argue that 支持X 的另一个原因。
However, other people stand on a different ground. They consider it harmful to do X. They firmly point out that 反对X 的第一个理由。 An example can give the details of this argument: 一个例子。
There is some truth in both arguments. But I think the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages. In addition to the above-mentioned negative effects it might bring about, X also may X 的有一个坏处。
2． 批驳观点式
A．一个错误观点。
B． 我不同意。
Many people argue that 错误观点。By saying that, they mean 对这个观点的进一步解释。An example they have presented is that 一个例子。（According to a survey performed by X on a group of Y, almost 80% of them 赞成这个错误观点或者受到这个错误观点的影响）。
There might be some element of truth in these people’s belief. But if we consider it in depth, we will feel no reservation to conclude that 与错误观点相反的观点。There are a number of reasons behind my belief. (以下参照辩论文的议论文写法)。
3． 社会问题（现象）式
A．一个社会问题或者现象。
B． 产生的原因
C．对社会和我们生活的影响
D． 如何杜绝。（如果是问题的话）
E． 前景的预测。
Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental problem. (X has increasingly become a common concern of the public). According to a survey, 调查内容说明这种现象的情况。（或者是一个例子）。
There are a couple of reasons booming this problem/phenomenon. 下面参照辩论式议论文的写法。
X has caused substantial impact on the society and our daily life, which has been articulated in the following aspects. 参照辩论式议论文的写法。
A dozen of measures are supposed to take to prevent X from bringing us more harm. 参照辩论式议论文的写法。
Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people will ……..
写作模板——图表式作文
It is obvious in the graphic/table that the rate/number/amount of Y has undergone dramatic changes. It has gone up/grown/fallen/dropped considerably in recent years (as X varies). At the point of X1, Y reaches its peak value of …(多少).
What is the reason for this change? Mainly there are … (多少) reasons behind the situation reflected in the graphic/table. First of all, …(第一个原因). More importantly, …(第二个原因). Most important of all, …(第三个原因).
From the above discussions, we have enough reason to predict what will happen in the near future. The trend described in the graphic/table will continue for quite a long time (if necessary measures are not taken括号里的使用于那些不太好的变化趋势).
英语四六级写作试题模板——辩论式议论文
模版1
Some people believe (argue, recognize, think) that 观点1. But other people take an opposite side. They firmly believe that 观点2. As for me, I agree to the former/latter idea.
There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief. First of all, 论据1.
More importantly, 论据2.
Most important of all, 论据3.
In summary, 总结观点. As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心.
或 From above, we can predict that 预测.
模版2
People hold different views about X. Some people are of the opinion that 观点1, while others point out that 观点2. As far as I am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds more weight.
For one thing, 论据1.
For another, 论据2.
Last but not the least, 论据3.
To conclude, 总结观点. As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心.
或 From above, we can predict that 预测.
模版3
There is no consensus of opinions among people about X（争论的焦点）。Some people are of the view that 观点1，while others take an opposite side, firmly believing that 观点2。As far as I am concerned, the former/latter notion is preferable in many senses. The reasons are obvious.
First of all, 论据1。
Furthermore, 论据2。
Among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest. That is, 论据3。
A natural conclusion from the above discussion is that总结观点。
As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心.
或 From above, we can predict that 预测.
(I)说明原因型模块
Currently, XX has been the order of the day. This does demonstrate the theory --- nothing is more valuable than XX
It is clear that (1). If you (2), as a result, your dreams will come true. On the contrary, if you (3).
Failure will be following with you. It turns out that all your plan falls through.
No one can deny another fact that (4).You don't have to look very far to find out the truth, in respect that we all know (5).It will exert a profound influence upon (6).With reference to my standpoint, I think (7).
注释:
1:XX的第一个优点
2:支持XX的做法
3:不支持XX的做法
4:XX的第二个优点
5:举例证明优点二
6:说明XX优点三的影响第三天我写的相应作文:
The importance of self-confidence
Currently, self-confidence has been the order of the day. This does demonstrate the theory --- nothing is more valuable than self-confidence.
It is clear that (self-confidence means trust in one's abilities). If you (are full of self-confidence, it will bring your creative power to play, arouse your enthusia** for work, and help you overcome difficulties), as a result, your dreams will come true. On the contrary, if you (have no confidence in yourself, there is little possibility that you would ever achieve anything ). Failure will be following with you。It turns out that all your plan falls through. No one can deny another fact that (self-confidence gives you light when you are in dark and encouragement when you are di**ayed).You don't have to look very far to find out the truth, in respect that we all know (the secret of MMe. Curie lies in perseverance and self-confidence, the latter in particular). It will exert a profound influence upon (the achievement of one's ambitions). With reference to my standpoint, I think (he that can have self-confidence can have what he will).
(I)说明原因型模块(2)
In recent years, XX has caused a heated debate on (1).
The factors for (2).First of all, (3).Then, there comes a case that (4). Moreover, (5). Especially when (6).Indeed, these unique points can be collected the remind people that (7).In this way, we should behave just like (8).
The impact of Television
In recent years, with the development of science and technology, 80 percent of all homes in China have satellite TV, offering as many as 50 channels. It has caused a heated debate on (the impact of television on children). Many parents are worried about the impact of so much television on children.
The factors for (parents' worry is that children are indulge in television and spend too much time on it.).First of all, (with so many programs to choose from, children are not getting as much exercise as they should ).Then, there comes a case that (some studies have show that excessive watching of television by millions of children has lowered their ability to achieve in school ).
Moreover, (the effect on children's minds are more serious than the effect on children's bodies). Especially when (the children are too **all to judge what programs are suit to them).Indeed, these unique points can be connected to remind parents that (they should pay close attention to and responsibilities for supervising their children's TV viewing).In this way, children will not be influenced too deeply.
(I)说明原因型模块(4)
For most of us today, (1). From above, we can find that the reasons why (2)are as follows.
The primary reason, I think, is (3).Second,(4). The third reason, actually, is (5).The significance for (6)。
Therefore, (7).
注释:
(1)人们针对XX的态度和举措
(2)归纳现状
(3)第一个原因
(4)第二个原因
(5)第三个原因
(6)重申造成现状的最重要原因
Pollution
Most of us today (recognize that environmental pollution has been a greatly serious problem. lots of plants trees corps are destroyed by bad air. many fish die of poisonous water. thousands of people die from eating poisoned fish or breathing in gas. therefore, environmental pollution should be responsible for these diseases that are disabling, or bringing death not only to human beings, but also to wild life.)From above, we can find that the reasons why (environment are polluted more and more seriously)are as follows.
the primary reason, I think, is (the reason of harmful substances into environment. for example, to prevent insects, farmers make use of great amounts of insecticides, so as to have bumper harvests. however, they pollute air, water and land ).
Second,(the gas coming from the car engines and factories also make environment polluted badly ). the third reason actually is (the result of a growing population in the world. everyday, so much litter and waste are poured out from houses, also pollute the environment ). The significance for (controlling pollution) noted that it's high time that more effective measures should be taken. Therefore, (new laws should be passed to limit the amount of pollutants from factories. moreover, in the households, there is an obvious need to reduce litter and waste. let's make our good efforts, and the world will be a safer place to live for us).
(I)说明原因型模块(5)
These days we often hear that (1).It is common that (2). Why does such circumstance occur in spite of social protects? For one thing, (3).For another, (4). What is more, since (5),it is natural that (6 ).To solve the problem is not easy at all, but is worth trying. We should do something such as (7) to improve he present situation, and I do believe everything will be better in the future.
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(1)提出论题
(2)说明现状
(3)理由一
(4)理由二
(5)理由三
(6)理由三引起的后果
(7)解决方法
Pollution of environment
These days we often hear that (our living conditions are getting more and more serious because of the destruction of our environment ).It is common that (many trees and animals are near extinction, and the all-important food chain has been destroyed.).
Why does such circumstance occur in spite of social protects? For one thing, (the population of the world is increasing so rapidly that the world has been so crowded. ).For another,(the overuse of natural resources has influenced the balance of natural ecology ). What is more, since (the industrial revolution ),it is natural that (a great number of factories have been springing up like mushrooms. The **oke and harmful chemicals released from factories also pollute the environment).
To solve the problem is not easy at all, but is worthing. We should do something such as (planting more trees, equipping cars with pollution-control devices and learning to recycling natural resources )to improve the present situation, and I do believe everything will be better in the future.
写作模板——图表式作文
It is obvious in the graphic/table that the rate/number/amount of Y has undergone dramatic changes. It has gone up/grown/fallen/dropped considerably in recent years (as X varies). At the point of X1, Y reaches its peak value of …(多少).
What is the reason for this change? Mainly there are … (多少)reasons behind the situation reflected in the graphic/table. First of all, …(第一个原因). More importantly, …(第二个原因). Most important of all, …(第三个原因).
From the above discussions, we have enough reason to predict what will happen in the near future. The trend described in the graphic/table will continue for quite a long time (if necessary measures are not taken括号里的使用于那些不太好的变化趋势).
写作模板——提纲式作文
1． 对立观点式
A. 有人认为X 是好事，赞成X， 为什么？
B. 有人认为X 是坏事， 反对X，为什么？
C. 我的看法。
Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X. They point out the fact that 支持X 的第一个原因。They also argue that 支持X 的另一个原因。
However, other people stand on a different ground. They consider it harmful to do X. They firmly point out that 反对X 的第一个理由。 An example can give the details of this argument:
There is some truth in both arguments. But I think the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages. In addition to the above-mentioned negative effects it might bring about, X also may X 的有一个坏处。
2． 批驳观点式
A．一个错误观点。
B． 我不同意。
Many people argue that 错误观点。By saying that, they mean 对这个观点的进一步解释。An example they have presented is that 一个例子。(According to a survey performed by X on a group of Y, almost 80% of them 赞成这个错误观点或者受到这个错误观点的影响)。
There might be some element of truth in these people’s belief. But if we consider it in depth, we will feel no reservation to conclude that 与错误观点相反的观点。There are a number of reasons behind my belief. (以下参照辩论文的议论文写法)。
3． 社会问题(现象)式
A．一个社会问题或者现象
B． 产生的原因
C．对社会和我们生活的影响
D． 如何杜绝。(如果是问题的话)
E． 前景的预测。
Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental problem. (X has increasingly become a common concern of the public). According to a survey, 调查内容说明这种现象的情况。(或者是一个例子)。
There are a couple of reasons booming this problem/phenomenon.下面参照辩论式议论文写法。
X has caused substantial impact on the society and our daily life, which has been articulated in the following aspects. 参照辩论式议论文的写法。
A dozen of measures are supposed to take to prevent X from bringing us more harm. 同上
Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people will ……..
辩论式议论文模版1
Some people believe (argue, recognize, think)that 观点1. But other people take an opposite side. They firmly believe that 观点2. As for me, I agree to the former/latter idea. There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief. First of all, 论据1. More importantly, 论据2. Most important of all, 论据3. In summary, 总结观点. As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心.或:From above, we can predict that 预测.
模版2
People hold different views about X. Some people are of the opinion that 观点1, while others point out that 观点2. As far as I am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds more weight.
For one thing, 论据1.
For another, 论据2.
Last but not the least, 论据3.
To conclude, 总结观点. As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心.
或 From above, we can predict that 预测.
模版3
There is no consensus of opinions among people about X(争论的焦点)。Some people are of the view that 观点1，while others take an opposite side, firmly believing that 观点2。As far as I am concerned, the former/latter notion is preferable in many senses. The reasons are obvious.
First of all, 论据1。
Furthermore, 论据2。
Among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest. That is, 论据3。
A natural conclusion from the above discussion is that总结观点。
As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心. 或 From above, we can predict that 预测.
参考资料：
1. 以 反转你的思考 为话题写作文
反转你的脑，换位思考
有一位农村小学生，他母亲交给他任务：每天下午放学回家，把羊赶到江滩上去吃草，天黑了，再把羊赶回家。每次赶羊出去，羊总是非常高兴地跟着小跑，可天黑赶羊回家时，羊总是赖着不肯走。于是小学生使劲拉，拉不动了，就用树枝抽羊 *** ，可这一抽，羊就乱蹦乱跳起来，更加不好赶。后来小学生想了一个办法：预先拔一小捆羊爱吃的草，赶羊时，往背后一背，羊看见小学生背上有草吃，就跟着小学生一边吃一边走回家。
从这件事中，人们可以领悟到设身处地的意义。起先，小学生只考虑羊要回家的道理，没有考虑到羊要吃草的道理。后来小学生为羊着想，站在丰的立场想办法，羊就乖乖地跟着他走了。
人类和羊有着类似的本性，他们大都是根据自己的理由来行事的。并且都认为自己的理由是正确的。1992年上半年，美国路易斯安那州罗林杀了5名大学生，并持枪抢劫银行，被判处第5次终身监禁。当法官保罗问他有什么话要说时，罗林回答说：“这将会是少数例外，所以我希望你和这些人会忍受。”接着他就唱起了一首宗教歌：“耶稣，我想更像你，我只是想你知道我在努力尝试，我知道我终身都是悲惨。”
这样一个职业罪犯，竟然认为他杀人抢劫是正确的。
因此，我们在说服人时，必须设身处地，站在他的立场上替他想想，弄清他的道理，并以他的感情和认识为起点，去引导他，他就会感到你是理解帮助他的知心人。这样，他就会听你的话，跟着你走了。如果你去拉他，逼他，甚至打他，他就有一种本能的反抗力，不但不会服你，反而要和你作对。
美国著名教育家阿奎曾经说过：“如果你希望某人接受你的观点，你就必须站在他的位置上，去和他谈心，引导他，千万不要隔着房间对他叫喊，不要说他笨，也不要命令他到你这边来，你必须从他所在的位置开始，一步一步地去耕耘，这是使他让步的惟一办法。”
美国有位出身中等阶层家庭的女教师，教着一群来自贫民阶层的学生。这些学生对她抱有反感。有一天，班上一个最调皮的学生把一罐油漆涂到墙上、黑板上和讲台上。女教师看到后，火冒三丈，正想严厉惩罚，突然校长来了。她转念一想：如果告诉了校长，这些穷孩子就会被撵出校门，后果不堪设想。于是她向校长解释说：他们正在上公众学课程，学习如何消除乱涂乱写的方法。结果，校长一走，教室里一片欢腾，女教师一下成了他们贫苦学生的人，大家都自愿听从她的教导。
设身处地就能赢得人心，转变立场就能转变人。
有一个单位的一名青工被外单位的人打伤了。他远在外地的父亲得知后，就来找这个单位的领导，怪他们没有保护好他的儿子，向他们提出种种要求，非常棘手。该单位的领导对青工的父亲说：“你儿子是我们的职工，打他的外单位的，因此我们是一‘家’人，都是被害者。我们的目标和利益是一致的，我们共同的责任和义务就是要求的**单位按政策、国法予以妥善处理。”那位父亲听后点头称是，明白了单位领导是与他站在同一立场上，便不再向他们提任何要求，并感谢单位领导对他儿子的关照。
2. 怎样写以等待为题的反转作文正值花季的我们等待着如花绽放的那一刻，一年后的六月栀子弥香，我们将告别初中的青葱岁月，经历华美的蜕变，我们将重新起航。
初入初中校园，面对高手如林，我曾不知所措。我明白我需要等待，就像默默成长的寒雪草一样，终有一天会见到雨霁后的彩虹。于是我便把“尽吾者也而不能至者，可以无悔矣”这样隽永的句子镌刻在心中，一路上奋勇前进，披荆斩棘，无悔青春年华。
等待并不是虚度年华，浪费光阴，也并不是躲在某个角落逃避自我。二是为了积蓄自己的力量，采撷成功的硕果，让平庸的生命焕出色彩。喧嚣的都市中人们行色匆匆，不愿脚踏实地地实现自己的梦想，这时等待、冷静便是最好的法宝，它不至于让成功如流星般转瞬即逝。
寒窗几载，曾经许下的美好憧憬等待着我们去实现。绚烂的六月将成为我们大放异彩，我们在等待，作为莘莘学子的我们在知识的海洋中驰骋、遨游，为的是在这蜕变的季节中像蝶儿一样拥有绝美的容颜。为过往的岁月写下一个完美的结局。
小树苗在阳光雨露的滋润中，等待着长成参天大树的一天。秋风萧瑟，枝头的落叶等待着回到泥土。我拾起它，细数它精致的纹理，明白了它等待的是落叶归根，回到它魂牵梦萦的归宿。雏鹰不断磨砺自我，等待的是在深邃蔚蓝的苍穹中自由翱翔。
我也在等待，等待着凭自己的努力谱下一段如夏花般绚烂的生命历程。纵使一路上有失意、伤感，我也会坚持走下去。有事回眸过去走过的路，它一直如月光般清澈。
等待将成为我青春年华中的一个符号。宣纸上走笔至此，心事了然，我会和同窗一起等待，与之共勉，创造属于自己的人生。
3. 反转的作文200字我的一次正确决定
决定是什么？有的人认为自己做了一次勇敢的决定；有的人认为自己做了一次错误的；有的人认为自己做了一次严肃的决定；还有的人认为自己做了一次坚定的决定。而我认为前天我作出了一次正确的决定。
前天，我坐公交车去上学，那天车上的人非常的多，我用力挤进了车厢中，等了半天，终于我旁边的一位坐着的叔叔起身下车了，我一下子挤过人群坐到了座位上。这时，有一位老人上了车，那时车上的人多极了，连下脚的地放也没有，老人只好站在车前门的台阶上。我觉得那位老人很可怜，被人们挤来挤去，都快站不稳了，人们都看了看那位老人，可是没有一个人给那位老人让座。我真想给那位老人让座，可是一想我离学校还远着呢，还要坐三十多分钟呢，当我不想让座的时候，车上的电视